🍫Blog Commenting - Cadbury 🍫

IALT: reflect on blog commenting on a blog post about Cadbury Chocolate!

After reading, or well looking at a image and a title, I found it boring. No offence to the blogger or this blog post, I was hungry for more, information, description, learning intention, and detail in your writing! I think the feedback that was left for her below, could help maybe not only me get what I want in a blog post, but also maybe what her future blog viewers would want! 

She titled it Dairy Milk Chocolate, and posted up an image of the Dairy Milk Chocolate "Turkish Delight", and that was it! I've never tasted or eaten this chocolate personally but I have tasted something close enough to it, and I found it disgusting.

I don't think this is Ana's best work compared to her others, but I think maybe this blog post was a misunderstanding! If you know what I mean therefore, maybe she will reply to my comment!

Please click HERE to leave Ana some feedback, to help her out with her blogging, and her blogging skills. Remember to leave positive and helpful feedback for Ana to use!

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Many Thanks.. 😁

📝Blog Commenting - Point England 📝

IALT: blog about blog commenting on my peers from Point England's blogs.

Today I was just wondering through my quad blogging buddy "Ana from Point England's blog. Ana is a year 6 and I decided to comment on one of her posts about "Who am I?". So basically in this presentation she would put up and bunch of character/people with the heading "Who am I", then on the next slide there would be the answers of the who the person or character is, 

Here is a few screenshots from her presentation "Who am I?"...

I thought of some feedback Ana could use for her next blogpost, but not only did I think of things she needs to work on but also things she improved on! For example as you read my comment I posted or put up on her blog post you will find I didn't only point out the things she needs to work on but things she needs to be called out for doing things that she hooked in her audience.. and espically hooked in me!

Here is a screenshot of my blog comment on Ana's blog post..

What do you think about my comment, and Ana's blog post! Well please feel free to "blog comment" on my blog and if you would like to leave comments under Ana's blog please click HERE!

But in other words thanks for viewing my blog post and feel free to leave feedback and feedforward on my work in the past and the upcoming blog posts yet to be shown.

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📝Blog Commenting....📝

IALT: comment on others blog (Quad Blogging Buddies) and leaving them wise feedback I think that can help them in the further!

For blog commenting I've decided to comment and leave feedback on one of my Quad Blogging Buddies Blogs... Seini. I commented on her blogpost based upon her Multiplication Challenge! This blogpost had an image and explanation on what they did but keep reading to find a screenshot (evidence) of my comment left on her blog.

Seini's blogpost:

My comment on Seini's blog post:

I really admired her blog post, but I thought I wanted to know more therefore feedback came to mind and comments came to mind also!

What do you think about my comment, on Seini's post?! Do you have any feedback for me to use in my Blog Commenting more often! 

If you would like to view Seini's blog and leave her some feedback of your own please HERE!

Please leave a comment below!

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🏛️Te Oro Performance Reflection🏛️

IALT: reflect on our Te Oro Experience Reflection

Today a group of people from Tamaki Primary School, travelled to the Te Oro Arts Centre to perform a skit or in other words a play about the Tamaki River.  In our play or act we had male fishers, eels, fish, a river, and singer along with ACTORS! It mainly about show casing how important taking our river is! We were also showcasing how littering around and in our rivers do affect our environment and community badly. 

Before appearing on stage and performing as one with my group I was NERVOUS! Like really Nervous... so nervous I couldn't count the amount of butterflies  could feel in my stomach. ONce we went on the stage there was no going back! We went from scene 1, to 2, to 3, then to 4 it was over by the minute! But we weren't as happy, excited and revealed as we thought we would have been! The reason was because the sound system wasn't working! The music that was being played from the laptop/screen had very low volume you could just hear over it. But instead of focusing on what went wrong, and on the negatives of the performance... I would like to focus more on what went good and the positives of our performance...

All sorts of different types of school were there! We explored their room and on their learning! For example some schools we saw were...

• Point England 
• Glen Brae
• Glen Taylor
• Tamaki College

And many more different schools we haven't seen yet! They had all sorts of designs, and creations for example they created a game on all sorts of websites like for example Scratch, and they also created creations they thought could help PEST! Or designs on what kind of creatures could come into your home during the day time. We came back to school until my next presentation at Te Oro which is with Ana, at 1.00 today! I can't wait to see what happens next and I can't wait to share it with my blog views/blog audiences. 

Here is a link to some of the performances...

CLICK HERE

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👩‍💻Quad Blog Commenting👩‍💻

IALT: comment on my quad blogging group, and leaving positive messages and feedback 

Today I've decided to do some  blog commenting, on my quad groups blog. I had 3 different choices to choose from to comment on, well 2 because yesterday I had commented on Ana from Point England's School. I have decided to comment on Seini from Point England also. I read Seine's post about her "Number Of The Week". As I was reading through her blog post a lot of feedback, and feedforward came to mind.

 

            

Commenting on Seini's Blog:

I decided to comment on her blog, because one of my goals, is to help other people improve on there blogging skills. One thing I found challenging with blog commenting on Seini's blog was finding something that she could improve on next time. As I read through Seini's blog I found a lot of things similar to my work, because a few years back I did the exact same task which was one thing I found interesting. We had our similarities, but also our differences..

One thing I look forward to is to see whether Seini uses the advice that was given to her by myself, and whether she can improve on her learning, and blogging skills. 

Seini's Blog LINK

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🖐️Blog Commenting (Pt England)🖐️

WALT: comment on others people's blogs, from others schools leaving positive feedback and positive comments!

As I went through my blog I saw on my blog checklist 3 different children, from 3 different schools were on my blog. The reason behind them being on my blog is to help myself improve and learn new things from them, and for them to learn new things from me. We're basically showing AKO, which is a school value we have at Tamaki primary meaning you learn from me and I learn from you, basically in other words learning from each other. I decided to pick at least one person, and so I went with Ana from Point England School. Anas blog link will be provided below along with the comment I left behind on her blog. Something I learnt about Ana was that she is only a year 5 student, which means to me that she is still learning about blogging skills. I read about her Chocolate blog post, this blog post was basically about guessing what the image of the chocolate before finding out what is was, as I reading this I was forming different feedback,  and feed forward to apply onto her blog. Below this text my blog comment will be provided, and below the image of the blog comment will be the link to Anas blog.

LINK TO ANA'S BLOG FROM POINT ENGLAND

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Please leave comments like I did for Ana below on my blog..

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