Wednesday 31 August 2016

Persuasive Writing (It Is Wrong To Fight)

WALT: persuade our audience what our thoughts, on whether we agree or not with the statement, given.
Persuasive Writing


It is wrong to fight, This type of writing will be explaining to my blog audience that I definitely agree with the statement "It is wrong to fight".. Keep reading



*Persuasive Writing*

I agree with the statement “It is wrong to fight”.

My first, and most important reason why “It is wrong to fight” is because it may lead to innocent people getting hurt, it could lead to serious injuries to the people who make the right choices and do the right thing.

For example if Violence were what the world would be more focused on, then it wouldn't be a safe place for people to be living, if a child dies from the bad decisions others make because violence is what they choose that doesn’t seem fair, or safe for anyone..  

Another reason why “It is wrong to fight” is because it wouldn’t bring any light to the world, if anything it would just encourage the world to become more darker. Some people think mainly of VIOLENCE, and that isn’t the best choice because, others mainly think of PEACE which is basically a better, and much safe world, if only it came into reality.

For example if people, wanted to help make a difference, a better difference in the world, then with all this violence I don’t believe it’s possible. Instead of the world becoming a more bright, safer, happier place, it wouldn’t be possible if everyone is too busy looking for new ways to start up more violence.

Lastly, the reason why “It is wrong to fight” is because the only thing that would happen alday is people getting more injured and hurt, and behind this disgraceful mess is violence.

For example, lately in the NEWS there has been an serious issue based on a man walking outside of the nightclubs, one punching an innocent man in face, and now he is currently suffering, Stitches to his head, A fractured nose, Cuts on his lips, and lastly bruises to the elbow and also tailbone. This poor man has suffered a lot, he’s basically lucky to be alive! If this were your friends and family getting hurt, and if this were what the world would be, I don’t think anyone would like it?!

I strongly believe “It is wrong to fight” because it wouldn’t be safe for the world, innocents will get hurt, everyone would be seriously injured, and it may lead to death perhaps, and lastly the world wouldn’t be a happy and safe bright place!

*Thank You*

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3 comments:

Anonymous said...

I love how you chose ideas to back up your reason ♥

Unknown said...

so do i

Anonymous said...

now this is what i call writing

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