Losana @ Tamaki Primary School: Sun Poetry

Thursday, 22 October 2015

Sun Poetry

Today for Writing we had to write Poetry about the sun

We had to put in 3 similes, 3 adjectives, 1 verbs and 1 metaphor

Look below to view my Sun Poetry

I hope you've enjoyed reading my Poetry about the Sun

Also please leave some feedback, and suggestions below

Thanks for viewing

2 comments:

Anonymous said...: Hi losana,
I like the way you put interesting words and sentences in your poetry.
I also like the way you used good words that help bring out the work you did.
KEEP IT UP!; 22 October 2015 at 12:35
Anonymous said...: Hi Losana,
I like the way you used interesting words to make a creative poem.
keep it up lol; 22 October 2015 at 12:36

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About Me

Malo E Lelei and greetings to you all, My name is Losana and I am a year 8 student, currently attending to Tamaki Primary School.

The classroom I am in for 2017 is Rm 9, the teacher of that classroom is Ms. Komor, and we have an awesome teacher aide - Kelly!

My favourite subject is READING!!

My favourite sport is netball, and my favourite food is Mcdonalds!!

This year I am looking forward towards making myself a better person, and also choosing the right path in life.

I am also looking forward to thinking about what kind of crowd I would choose to surround myself with.

One person that inspired me was my sister Stephanie because of the way she learned from her mistakes. Another reason is because she told me when life knocks you down you choose whether to get back up.

I look forward to an exciting year in Room 9.