I am a Year 8 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Ms. Komor.
HI LOSANA,GREAT WIRTING.MAYBE NEXT TIME YOU CAN USE A BIT MORE DETAIL.BUT THE REST WAS GREAT.KEEP IT UP.
Thank you Frances for the advice and maybe it will come in handy with my writing more:)
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HI LOSANA,GREAT WIRTING.MAYBE NEXT TIME YOU CAN USE A BIT MORE DETAIL.BUT THE REST WAS GREAT.KEEP IT UP.
Thank you Frances for the advice and maybe it will come in handy with my writing more:)
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